Ren Ga

[A Renga is a collaborative japanese verse form. It can be written by any number of poets. It is written in alternating wakkis (WakkiWakki?) (7-7) and hokkus (5-7-5). Each new set of lines should respond to the previous one, by subtly turning on am image or a word. Wordplays which shift the meaning of a word in the previous line are highly valued. The syllabic structure, is, of course, a crude translation.Are there any literary Japanese speakers who want to enlighten us on renga form in Japanese?]

My shoes were so big the mouse

got tangled up in the web

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 My shoes were so big the mouse
 got tangled up in the web

 WikiWikiWeb
 so vast it toggles the head
 so I go to bed

 Sugarplums dance in my bed
 The mouse ate them then fled off -

 dragging a pointer
 on-screen, anticipating
 a double-click

  Right-click once then twice now thrice
  D*** the machine is frozen

 beep beep beep beep beep
 wiki devoured my edits
 really good edits

 EllenFeiss is mighty nice 
 Sugar, Spice and all things twice!

 Should RenGa rhyme or
 Is that too much distraction
 From the HaiKu-ness?

 Sugar, spice and all twice nice
 D*** I'm getting addicted

 Like moth to a flame
 Moths in circling of candles
 Debate the issues